Engineering Question

Amount of Work:12 pages DOUBLE
Type of paper:Research paper
type of work:Write from scratch
paper format:Other
Academic Level:Bachelor
Sources needed:No specific source required
Paper Details:I submitted an essay to my teacher gave a bad grade and had alot of feedback to it.Its a research paper in building engineering.its also needed to draw in Autocad.
See my paper details,my paper and feedback receivedfile attached below: